War Here; War at Home

By Nicole B.


  1. Ji Won Said,

    November 15, 2012@ 11:35 am      Reply

    I really likes how you took some specific words out and made a little piece of writing. The picture was also eye-catching so people would want to read it. It is also a great drawing, people would want to read it. It was cool how you could take that writing into a small piece.

  2. Alyssa Said,

    November 15, 2012@ 9:40 am      Reply

    I liked ho you crossed out the words and made a new story out of the words.
    I love it! 🙂

  3. Brandon Zhang [STUDENT] Said,

    September 24, 2012@ 4:09 pm      Reply

    it was very good and captured my attention.

  4. raee Said,

    September 17, 2012@ 4:18 pm      Reply

    I really like the way the red lines overlap the words in the background and I love how the black lines curve and go all wispy. Great work!

  5. Katrina Said,

    September 17, 2012@ 4:02 pm      Reply


  6. Jessica Said,

    September 17, 2012@ 3:59 pm      Reply

    I’ve never seen your poetry before and I love it 🙂 I like how you chose to repeat the word apologize, and the word dead to emphasize them.

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