4 Comments

  1. Christina J said:

    You’re vacation sounds fantastic!
    I think you had a wonderful time with your family and…
    Always the best wishes for the wedding!
    I noticed some descriptive word and I could imagine the scene.
    I also liked you writing details about your story.

    January 14, 2015
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  2. Jay P said:

    I think your vacation was way better than mine. I liked the way you told us a story. Nice writing!

    January 15, 2015
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  3. Austin L said:

    You wrote about very descriptively about your vacation with lots of details that make the event seem lively.
    Also, Happy Wedding for your uncle and aunt-in-law!

    -Austin

    January 15, 2015
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  4. HyukJin K said:

    I think your story is very descriptive. Good luck for your uncle and aunt-in-law!

    January 23, 2015
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