What did you do well?
I think I chose the appropriate literary devices to analyze the text. I also think my analysis was convincing and insightful of textual features.
What do you still need to work on?
I still need to work on organization and language. My language should be more clear and effective, with good uses of accuracy in grammar, vocabulary, and sentence construction.
What specific steps can you take to improve for next time?
The specific steps I can take to improve for next time are reading English books and reviewing literary devices. These activities might help me to improve my writing.