The feedback I was given was that my analyses didn’t closely relate to my civic virtues and that all stammering should be editing out. I feel that the feedback was logical because I haven’t directly related my analyses to any civic virtues using any key words. This feedback gives me directions to ensure that I use key words from my claim and better edit my interviewees, and I can show this next time by including key words from my claim in my explanation and ensuring that there are no unnecessary recordings from my interviewees.