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  1. Hey Andy!

    First of all, I love the way you clear quotes from the text as evidence, supporting your claim. Well done!

    However, I think you could work on grammar or conventions. Remember the Chicken Song we went over in class? That might be useful revising your post. Also, be aware that the story was written by Amy Tan.

    -Daniel

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