My Life

My life

Enthusiastic.
She turns challenges into a genuine learning moment.
Takes constructive criticism to improve
and be the better version of herself.
Her accepting charisma is always
amiable.

Positive-Genuine
Genuine (adjective)
I chose the word Genuine instead of positive because I was being really genuine with my word choice. And I wanted to make sure to emphasize the word.

Effective- Constructive
Constructive (adjective)
I chose to use constructive as a replacement word for effective because effective is cliché. And because constructive isn’t as common, the poem would flow more.

Personality- Charisma
Charisma (Noun)
Instead of personality I would suggest using charisma because it sounds fluent when the poem is being read, also its more of a fancy word for personality which is also over used

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