This is a monologue I wrote to describe this whole situation
April 2, 2020 at 3:37 pm
I like how relatable this was, it isn’t super dramatic but it almost perfectly describes this situation.
I related to the fact that lots of my friends went back to America, I can’t really talk to them unless I wake up quite early or sleep late.
In my opinion, a part you can improve on was the entire thing was a bit slow, you could have cut out some parts or made them less wordy to make people more interested/make the script more interesting.
April 2, 2020 at 6:34 pm
I liked how relatable this was. It may not be super aggressive or theatrical but it sums out the the situation pretty well.
I related to the eating part, when my phone is charging and I’ve already finished every single book in our house, I usually just go and eat.
Maybe close the curtains and turn on the lights? The lighting was pretty bad.
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