The two main things I feel like I can improve are my organization and language use.
What did you do well?
- My understanding and interpretation of the poem were clear, and I could explain my thoughts distinctly. My understanding of the stylistic features used and their effects were also clear.
What do you still need to work on?
- I still need to work on my organization and language skills. My transitions between body paragraphs were not smooth, and the language I used was informal (e.g., “we”)
What goals do you have for next time?
- Refrain from using informal language
- Coming up with a better way to integrate all of my paragraphs together to flow smoothly
How will you work to achieve them?
- I will read more exemplary essays and learn how they organized their work and used formal language.
- what did you accomplish today? did you get through everything on the agenda? what did you not get to finish and why?
We were able to thoroughly discuss our 9 questions. This enabled us to get a better idea of what all of us thought of about this scene. We also read through the script once only but we were able to add a bit more emotion to our actions as we understood our character better.
- what is your plan for each ensemble member between today and the next rehearsal? what should everyone be doing to prepare for the next rehearsal?
We planned to somehwat memorise our lines for the first few pages so we have more time later on to create and polish our blocking ideas. We also planned to divide the scirpt into 5 sections in the next rehearsal so we can be a bit more organised.
- what is YOUR OWN personal plan to prepare for next rehearsal
I plan to read the script several times and memorise my lines in the first few pages so I can be prepared for the next rehearsal. I will read the script several times to see which way of reading my lines sound better as well.
1. DISCUSS your role in the development process: What did you contribute? How did you collaborate with your ensemble? What were some successes of that collaboration?
- I contributed by giving many ideas to my team. Since we were going to present our piece to elementary school kids, we had to make our actions bigger and more straightforward. We had to think of different ways we could present it. All of us equally would come up with many ideas for each scene. We all would listen to each other’s ideas, try them all out, and finally pick which one we thought worked the best. Sometimes we joined two ideas together to make a better one. We also thought about what props all of us could bring to make our performance even more enjoyable. People who had good props would bring them and show them to the rest of our group to see if we all approved of it. One success of our good collaboration was knowing what to do for every line/scene. Overall, our working process was very collaborative as we all contributed equally.
2. DISCUSS your experience as a performer in this piece: What do you think and feel about your performance and performing for an audience? What new insights did you gain (yourself, theatre, audiences, performances, etc.) through this experience?
- I think that if our group had been given more time, we would have done better. Our performance went well, but there were many pauses as we were confused because we did not know what to do next. Performing in front of a young audience felt different from performing our individual monologues in front of our class. Since they are younger, they would exaggerate their reaction. For example, in our performance, a line said, “take a deep breath”. Our action was to take a deep breath, so when we did it during the performance, the kids giggled and took a deep breath with us. This made me feel more confident and happy that they were enjoying our performance. Sometimes the audience would not react at all. This made me understand that all audiences are different from each other. Some might be more expressive while some can be quieter, but it does not necessarily mean that the more silent audience did not enjoy the performance.
3. DISCUSS what new learning or understanding about theatre or the process of creating this piece you gained. What do you now KNOW or UNDERSTAND that you didn’t before?
- After knowing that this assessment was meant to be done quickly and performed on an unusual stage, I realised that we should adapt to any environment. I now know that I should always keep in mind that we should act in any location while creating and practising our performance. I also understand that we should always use the time given to us and make it productive. Being productive and finishing our performance earlier would earn us some time to do full dress rehearsals, which would help us feel more comfortable performing. This experience has helped me learn new points about theatre, which will help me in my future performances.
What am I doing well on?
- I am doing well in the speaking/listening and reading standards. I have improved in the reading standard because I have practised by doing more reading and annotating. I always speak out my opinions and thoughts about whatever is being discussed in class. I do collaborate with my peers whenever we are given time to discuss what we are learning. I also am responsible in terms of submitting my work on time and clarifying any questions I have.
What do I still need to work on?
- I still need to work on my writing skills. I have definitely improved from the start and the end of quarter 1, but I want to get even better, mainly using various literary devices/techniques.
What steps can I take to continue moving forward?
- I can ask my teacher whenever I need help on my writing tasks as she can help guide me and give me feedback that I can work on. I can also use tools like Grammarly to help edit my work more carefully. I can also read more books, articles, and reading material to improve my vocabulary and thought process of forming sentences. I can also use IXL to practise my writing and reading standards.
I am currently reading the book “One of us is next” by Karen McManus.
In my opinion, this book does not have much potential for the final literary essay project at the end of this year. The book is very literal and the writer does not use many literary devices to describe the story. This book is a good book but I don’t think it’s a good book for me to analyze and write an essay on. My next steps are to maybe find another book I think might be more suitable for me to analyze at the end of the year and also to analyze the book while I am reading it.
Who is Constantine Stanislavski?
- Born in Moscow, Russia in 1863 (died:1938)
- Began as an actor and moved on to become a director and teacher
- Parents didn’t indulge in his passion for theatre, so he changed his name
- Developed a new system of actor training and development – a new way to approach theatre
- It took years of experimenting to get to what is now known as the Stanislavski system
5 elements of actor preparation:
Learning to relax the muscles and eliminate physical tension while performing
Learning to think like an actor and to respond to one’s own imagination
Discovering the sensory base of work: learning to memorise and recall sensations, often called “sense memory” and/or “affective memory”; learning to work from a small sensation and expand it, a technique Stanislavski called “spheres of attention”
developing the ability to interact with other performers spontaneously, and with an audience, without violating the world of the play
The more fertile the actor’s imagination, the more interesting would be the choices made in terms of objectives, physical action, and creating given circumstances around the character
there’s no such thing as ‘actually’ on the stage. Art is a product of imagination, as the work of a dramatist should be. the aim of the actor should be to use his/her technique to turn the play into a theatrical reality. in this process, the imagination plays by for the greater part.
One activity that we did during Improvisation was called “Yes, and”. We were paired up with someone, and we would have to respond to their statement with a “Yes and” at the start.
a: Let’s go to the beach today
b: Yes, and let’s bring some drinks there!
We were only allowed to add on to our partner’s sentence; we were not allowed to change the topic and say anything else at the start of the sentence other than “Yes, and”.
- I used to think that it wouldn’t be wrong to not participate in games and ask my questions. It is not that it is wrong, but now I think it is better to participate in games and ask whatever questions I have. After I stopped being shy and just started taking risks, I realised how much more I learned. I started participating in more games, and I understood that my risk-taking made my classmates feel more comfortable participating, which resulted in more of us learning more from the game.
- I remember one big idea about Improvisation is how I should go along with anything my co-actor says. The “Yes, and” activity will help me remember this. It was emphasised that the scene will not go anywhere if we say ‘no’ or don’t go along with something our co-actor says. This idea will help make my scene easy frot the audience to understand and will flow smoothly.
- One thing I did well was that I took more risks. Instead of acting as a teenager, which I am, I acted as an old lady. I think this makes the scene more interesting and challenges the person acting with me. One thing I struggled with is to come up with ideas quickly. I wanted to think outside of the box and act as a character I normally would ever act as. I hope I can work on this better throughout the theatre lessons. Observing my peers and how they approach an acting task or working with my classmates will definitely help me improve to become a better ensemble member. When I observe people acting, I tend to start doing what they did that I liked. This will broaden and build my acting skills. If I work more often with my peers than by myself, I will learn how to work as an ensemble better.
What did you do well
- I used imagery and many phrases to easily convey the setting or how the character felt
What do you still need to work on
- I need to work on my grammar and my narrative techniques
Set a goal for yourself for the creative writing portfolio and post-assessment
- I hope to improve my grammar and how to describe experiences/characters better