What you did well in your essay.
I believe that in my essay the side I was good at was having great claims and evidence to support my claims. I stated all of them very well.
What you might like to improve.
I think that in my essay, for my conclusion I could have thinking more outside of the box while I was writing it.
Are there any areas where you marked yourself differently than Ms. Rivera? What are your thoughts?
In the area that was about tone, my expectations for myself were lowering than I thought. I marked myself approaching but got graded meetings. My thoughts for that was I underestimated my ability to work and probably wasn’t feeling so confident.
What was the biggest challenge that you faced while researching, planning, and writing this essay? How did you overcome this challenge?
Planning and writing wasn’t the main challenge for me in this essay, my biggest challenge was to find different evidence from different resources that would be helpful. Many of the pieces of evidence from the different articles were the same. So, I had to be more careful while reading.