Up there is the book
I think that I did well because in my book I use a lot of punctuation and a lot of dialogue. And in this ebook, I use cool pictures that fit with the story and backgrounds that fit and that makes the words easy to read. But I think I could work better on my interest in the story. But I think that the story hooks the reader but then later on, in the story it gets less interesting. I really think I did well in my story writing the story. But the words I use are descriptive and they make you interested. But you might think differently so the story is up there go ahead and read if you haven’t already.