May 14, 2020 at 9:27 AM
May 14, 2020 at 10:27 AM
I like how you marked each word in the 6-word memoir and made things very clear. I believe the audio explaining about your broken arm could be improved by having a script and explaining more clearly. (I really like your speech about your broken arm but because all of the extracts, it made the speech a bit boring.)
May 14, 2020 at 1:15 PM
I really liked your collage because it’s SO colorful and the rainbow “STUCK” really emphasizes the word. Also the personification in the journal entries is really interesting (the part about the email screaming).
May 22, 2020 at 4:28 PM
i just love the like the hour glass and the cemetery just wonderful
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