What you did well in your essay. 

What I did well in my essay was including  good evidence and good claims.

What you might like to improve. 

I think I should improve and work more on my conclusion sentences, and this very important because it’s the small paragraph on where it summarizes your essay and brings it to a close.

Are there any areas where you marked yourself differently than Ms. Rivera? What are your thoughts?

There wasn’t any areas that Ms. Rivera and I marked differently, so it means that, we both agree on each other.

What was the biggest challenge that you faced while researching, planning and writing this essay? How did you overcome this challenge?

Writing and planning wasn’t much of a struggle for me but my biggest challenge I faced on this essay was that I had a hard time researching. Because I really want to have the best evidence and the strongest to support my argument. I overcame this challenge by trying my best to research my topic. And, the debate word document also helped me a lot, since there were a lot of evidence that I could use.

What Kind of Person is Percy Jackson? 

In Percy Jackson and the lightning Thief, Percy Jackson was brave. This is because on page 13, Percy killed Mrs. Dodds by swinging the sword right at Mrs. Dodds, I think this was a brave thing for Percy to do because it might be very hard to kill your teacher, but Percy was brave enough and he still killed his teacher. Another time in this story I thought Percy was brave was on page 55, because when Percy killed the monster all by himself. That was a very brave thing for Percy to do because he used the monster’s own horn, and he killed the Minotaur. Based on these actions one can infer that Percy Jackson was brave because he killed Mrs. Dodds and the Minotaur all by himself, and I thought that was brave because Percy is only a 12-year-old kid and killing monsters all by himself without any training is a very strong and brave thing to do.  

Below is my t-chart of character traits of Percy Jackson.

This unit was one of the most fun and wonderful unit this year. To sum this fun unit up, I had made a book creator with all assignments and projects given from my teacher. Hope you enjoy reading this book. I also have a quick video of a reflection for this project.

This will be a link to my powerpoint for my proposal. There is a video that is below.

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Please enjoy!

This is what I wrote for the Dear Abby Letter.

What went well in this project?
In this project what went really well was that I finish the project on time with lots of information to say about Past burials and Now burials. This early human project was a really fun and interesting project, it let me learn a lot of early human informations, one thing I learned was that some early humans just throw their dead in the river or off a cliff.

What didn’t go so well?
When I was doing this project I forgot one very important part, while I did this project, I was only focused one early humans, but Ms. Shannon sent me an email and said that remember this is a Early Human and Us project, not only focused on Early Humans. So that was a mistake that I learned.

If I could do it again, would I change?

I would change the topic, because before I was really interested in burials and how early humans buried their dead. But after I saw a flipgrid video of Diet, I thought that diet was also really interesting, I have a ton of question on Diet of early humans, after thinking I was kinda surprised of early humans eating raw meat.

In this project I think most of it was successful, I really wish to do this project so that I could learn more about her ancestors!