A new book

I notice that my second narrative has more description and has more powerful vocabulary compared to my first one. I tried to use a dash in my writing, showing how I had interrupted someone:

“What’s wrong—”


Where is your—”

“Didn’t think of anything yet.”

“How about I help—”

“It’s okay.”

“I have an idea. Write about—”

Onomatopoeia was also used in my introduction. I started with the sounds of a clock ticking to show that I was really bored and time had “slowed down” for me. I also used italics to represent that the first sentence is a prologue, and that was something different in my writing. I like my final piece, one of the highlights from my writing is the descriptive language.

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