My conclusion & introduction improved after I worked on it in class. The two paragraphs became very strong and could also hint you what the narrative is mainly about. What’s the conflict, who’s the main characters… I also corrected a lot of verb tense problems. In my original draft, the tense I’m using is always switching, in narrative writing, it’s well, illegal (you’ll go to grammar jail). After really working on my draft, I improved it and fixed all the problems I found.