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“When it's dark, be the one who turns on the light." Joseph

Narrative

I think my narrative this time was a lot better in terms of the final product, due to my teacher giving my class an editing checklist station process. It made me take note of what I need to edit and make sure that I edit my writing in the best way. My topic was not my first option for my narrative, but after I went to write my first option I found out that I did not remember much of the actual story and had to fake some information. I decided to choose my second option (this story) and I got quite far, so I ended up writing about this narrative. For my ending in this narrative, I went for a goofy approach. I kinda wanted to express this inner voice idea and use it to make some sort of new style of writing conclusions. My original introduction and conclusion were more of a place holder/rough draft of one I could use. I did not find out that it was a really bad conclusion until I read it over and compared it with other classmate’s narratives. I hope that others can take note and improve off of other’s narratives, reading one and just finding what that author did well can greater support your own methods. Just try some of their strategies on your own piece, which can greatly improve it from being okay to GREAT.

Thanks for spending time to read this (reflection thingy)Lucky Person

 

BYE!

Where I’m From

 

Who am I? 

I am from the yums of the western world, 

From the rare fried onions in In and Out Cheeseburgers; 

The unique buttery and thick ice cream from Jesse’s Ice Cream, 

Why are they all in the US? 

 

I am from contaminated cities and grey skylines, 

From the time of old and new; 

Sky-high apartment buildings and cluttered houses, 

From human artificial traffic and crazy drivers. 

 

I am from movies, 

From Universal’s impressive action movies all the way to Disney’s childish films; 

Marvel’s action productions to DC’s supernatural worlds, 

Stranger Things sci-fi storyline to Game of Thrones war and truce story. 

 

I am from board games and video games, 

From Monopoly’s hourly business strategies to Settlers of Catan’s trading worlds; 

Minecraft blocky worlds to the simple yet fun world of Roblox oofs, 

This is my life! 

 

From foods like as if they came from heaven, 

To the skies like an apocalyptic world, 

From the action movies as realistic as life, 

To the games that are like my life. 

 

This is who I am, 

And I will always be me. 

No matter what happens in the future, 

I will still be who I was meant to be. 

Filthy Water to CLEAN Water!

In my Filter I used :

-One rubber band

-One metal web

-Two fabric (one on top and one underneath)

-One plastic cup

-Two half cones (the top of cups cone thing)

-A lot of rocks

-A bit of dirt/sand

 

Q. Why is engineering important?

A. It is important because engineers help design the world and shape the cities and villages. Without engineers, who could be in a big mess, buildings falling over after completion, people randomly doing projects for no reason. There would be no one to solve our problems in the world, they are the ones that build and design solutions to our problems.

Q. What was your challenge?

A. The fact that I did not know too much about what is in a filter and what actual components are in a filter and I did not have many materials to work with.

Q. What was your problem?

A. The problem was we needed clean water and we had to filter really dirty water to survive, there were some materials that were on the shores and that was all we had. One of the ideas behind this design challenge was that we had limited resources even though we had duck tape, (my team did not use the tape! 🙂 ) but it was still hard.

Q. Why did you choose that design and how does it work? Was your design successful? How might you change your filter if you could do it again?

A. I chose this design because it would not take forever to make and it was simple and conserves materials, it requires little materials. My design basically has the big and nonwater substance trapped on the top and most of the filthy water gets filtered by the rocks. My team’s design was more or less successful, I would change it by adding multiple layers and maybe making it so I don’t need to hold it and it stands by itself.

Who I Am…

I am a Student

I am a Gamer

I am a Sports Athlete

I am who I am…

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