One thing I did well in my Argumentative essay was including strong points. I bileave I explained my points so that the reader could understand my thoughts. However, I tried to add in as much as possible to my essay, which caused a lot of misspelled words, and grammar issues which I didn’t have enough time to edit. Along with my points, I think I supported them with lots of evidence from a trustworthy source. But still, I did not follow the essay model. For instance, i did not restate my argument when I was supposed to. Overall I think my essay was good, but sill a little rushed, and still with lots of area to improve next time.