1. What you did well in your essay./I prepared nice and many resources and I review the larger argument and highlight evidence that support my position.
  2. What you might like to improve./I think i should use more various words and my tone should be more formal.
  3. Are there any areas where you marked yourself differently than Ms. Rivera? What are you thoughts?/I don’t know a lot of words so i thought i wrote with various words but, Ms.Rivera know many words than me so maybe she thought i didn’t wrote various words.
  4. What was the biggest challenge that you faced while researching, planning and writing this essay? How did you overcome this challenge?/My biggest challenge was searching resources because it was hard to find nice resources so i spend a lot of time for searching resources.