1. What you did well in your essay.

My introduction paragraph stated clearly what the essay was going to talk about and started off with an interesting hook. My body paragraphs also included details to specify the main points.

  1. What you might like to improve.

I’d like to improve the tone of the essay into a more formal kind.

  1. Are there any areas where you marked yourself differently than Ms. Rivera? What are you thoughts?

l suppose that my concluding statement did retrace back to my main points, but could relate to the introductory paragraph more.

  1. What was the biggest challenge that you faced while researching, planning and writing this essay? How did you overcome this challenge?

My biggest challenges were quoting from articles and specifying who wrote it (the author). I overcame this challenge by asking questions and working more on it.