My narrative link: https://app.bookcreator.com/read/ybidcQAaShWJsgJwGeqhGg(copy/paste)

My reflection

When my first draft was finished, I realized that I had a lot of grammar problems. I changed a lot of words and creating new paragraphs and reduces the problem.(but not fully cleared) From this, I learned that I need to check the paragraphs after I wrote to find the problems.