Narrative Reflection

The difference between my first draft and my final copy of my narrative is that the first one was very simple, but then the last one was more detailed because i included a variety of punctuation marks, different types of figurative language, and complex uses of dialogue. I learned a lot in this unit about a catchy introduction, and a conclusion that fits the story well. I feel really good about my personal narrative, however I think it could’ve been better if I used more descriptive language and punctuation. My first draft barely had any figurative language but after my revision and edits i added about 14 more pieces of figurative language.

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