Q1.What you did well in your essay?
A1. I use it many times in the introduction so there are small mistakes.
Q2.What you might like to improve?
A2. I want to improve on some structure of the essay.
Q3.Are there any areas where you marked yourself differently than Ms. Rivera? What are your thoughts?
A3. There are some different parts but I agree with Ms.Rivera’s marked because I don’t know all of the information and I don’t have enough time so I checked very fast.
Q4. What was the biggest challenge that you faced while researching, planning, and writing this essay? How did you overcome this challenge?
A4. Researching and planning were not very hard but the writing was beat challenging to me because I tried to change my writing style by using new skills that I learned at school.