1.What you did well in your essay.
I write my essay clearly so you could know what am I saying
2.What you might like to improve.
3.Are there any areas where you marked yourself differently than Ms. Rivera? What are you thoughts?
4.What was the biggest challenge that you faced while researching, planning and writing this essay? How did you overcome this challenge?
writing, because I always planning good, but when I start my draft, it got terrible.